Glistening in the glittering dust of her sorrows
Cocooned in the parched feelings of regrets
And missed chances
She held on to one tiresome breathe
Washed away by the fresh volumes of tears
Tears got drained into the River
And the River into seas
And the seas into ocean
And the ocean swallowed the pain
Beautifully expressed….
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Thank you
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Wow Nawazish..who could have thought that pain and grief can also sound this beautiful!
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Thank you so much Yeshu!🙈🙈🙈
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Ro hamesha.
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Aapse seekh
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Bakwas seekho Bas
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Wow, how did you just express grief so beautifully?
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Thank you so much Akshita!🙈🙈🥺
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beautifully expressed…..
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Thank you so much
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Lovely. I so associate myself with the poem
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Glad you liked it
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You expressed the pain and flow of tears so beautifully N.
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Thank you so much!🙈❤
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I like the inspiration behind the post😎
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Awww! You are bestest!🤣
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I don’t like the word best when it comes from you🐝
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🥺🥺🥺
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Woah. Nice one Nawazish!
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Thank you so much Sep!❤🙈
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“Cocooned in the parched feelings” this line. Omg soo gooddd 🥺❤️
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I am glad you liked it….thank you so much!❤🥺
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Nawazish, gorgeous poem! It is a voice of healing and catharsis. ❤
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Thank you so much Cheryl!❤
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How beautiful Nawaz and that last line.. truly heartfelt! 💖
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Thank you so much!❤
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You’re sooo welcome💖💖👏
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Wow, mind-blowing poetry feels like the waves swirling beautifully into the gentle sea.
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful words 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Joann
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okay WOW. This is so beautifully penned! 🥺❤
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Thank you so much!
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Lovely lines. Beautiful and poignant ❤
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Thank you so much!❤
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Beautiful lines❤️😊
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Thank yoh
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That’s amazing💝💝
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Thank you!❤
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