Tears

Glistening in the glistening dust of her sorrows

Cocooned in the parched feelings of regrets

And missed chances

She held on to one tiresome breathe

Washed away by the fresh volumes of tears

Tears got drained into the River

And the River into seas

And  the seas into ocean

And the ocean swallowed the pain

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  1. Beautifully expressed….

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  2. Wow Nawazish..who could have thought that pain and grief can also sound this beautiful!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Yeshu!๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ

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      1. Bakwas seekho Bas

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  3. akshita1776 says:

    Wow, how did you just express grief so beautifully?

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Akshita!๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿฅบ

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  4. beautifully expressed…..

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much

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  5. Deepika says:

    Lovely. I so associate myself with the poem

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Glad you liked it

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  6. You expressed the pain and flow of tears so beautifully N.

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!๐Ÿ™ˆโค

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  7. Jigglypuff says:

    I like the inspiration behind the post๐Ÿ˜Ž

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Awww! You are bestest!๐Ÿคฃ

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      1. Jigglypuff says:

        I don’t like the word best when it comes from you๐Ÿ

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      2. Nawazish says:

        ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ

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  8. Sep says:

    Woah. Nice one Nawazish!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Sep!โค๐Ÿ™ˆ

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  9. “Cocooned in the parched feelings” this line. Omg soo gooddd ๐Ÿฅบโค๏ธ

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    1. Nawazish says:

      I am glad you liked it….thank you so much!โค๐Ÿฅบ

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  10. Nawazish, gorgeous poem! It is a voice of healing and catharsis. โค

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Cheryl!โค

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  11. How beautiful Nawaz and that last line.. truly heartfelt! ๐Ÿ’–

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!โค

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      1. You’re sooo welcome๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ‘

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  12. Wow, mind-blowing poetry feels like the waves swirling beautifully into the gentle sea.

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much

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  13. laborsettadelledonne says:

    Beautiful words ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you Joann

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  14. Diya says:

    okay WOW. This is so beautifully penned! ๐Ÿฅบโค

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!

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  15. besondersite says:

    Lovely lines. Beautiful and poignant โค

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!โค

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  16. Olivia Ava says:

    Beautiful linesโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  17. That’s amazing๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you!โค

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