She was a beautiful dream,
A dream of yesterday, a dream of tomorrow
A dream of places afar, a time that has long passed.
Wrapped in the scent of morning breeze,
She was everything I could never have.
A exuberant dream,
Of life, of meaning, of fulfillment,
A lucid dream, I chase with my eyes open,
I look from afar and cry at my incompetence,
I howl at my fate and wail at misery,
I wait and wait for the time to be right,
And with just a snap of finger everything falls apart,
I looked everywhere and she was never found,
Alas! I lost her due to my failure and cowardice.
Such a rich title😂😂😂
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Hahaha! When nobody is willing to help🥺🥺
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Huhhh I dreamed her today, but I am still waiting, hahahaha, it’s beautiful, you put it perfectly,
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Thank you so much!
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Very beautiful 💕
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Thank you so much Annabel!
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🥳🥂
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A lost dream. This was a beautiful read Nawazish. I love the title you gave given to this post.
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Thank you so much Yeshu! How have you been?
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All good yaar..you say. I am just fed up of this covid and vote situation. Hoping this end soon.
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I am good too. Corona is taking a huge toll now on mental as well as physical health. Take care Yeshu!❤
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You too take care Nawazish ❤️❤️
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Very beautiful!!🖤
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Thank you Akshita!😃
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Aapki zindagi me Kitna dukh hai jo aise likhre ho??
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Chupa hua dukh hain jo bahar aa raha!
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Itna dukh Kyu
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Neend deprived
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Ab time aagaya aapka 😂
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Yup🤭
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It is beauty I love. In love and with love I seek the Maker of the beautiful 💖🙏
Keep dreaming of beauty and love Nawazish. You shall find …😊💖
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Thank you so much Sir!
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My pleasure Nawazish
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Nice dream na? I’m having only nightmares lately ! Nice poem Zi 💕
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Thank you so much! What happened? You alright?
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Donno Zi.. I’m ok .. still unable to smell … walking around with a mask .. my aunts house, who live close by, everyone tested positive and two elders admitted … so a bit anxious and trying to help as much … hands full .. ❤️
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Take care Ru of yourself and your family. Keep calm🥺
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Yeah! That’s what is needed … all is well is what I keep saying
How are you Zi… missing WP and I want to pour out so much here.. no time 🙃
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I am doing good. Reached home today!
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Oh wow! So all exams done …
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Yup😁😁
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Wow … congratulations doc 😃❤️….
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Results remaining yet🥺🥺
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That will be goood 😀🙌
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sending love Ru!
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Awwww Cindy .. thank you so much 💕💕hugs 💕💕
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You’re so welcome Rue!!! Hugs back!❤️🤗
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Beautiful ❤️❤️
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Thank you
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This is so beautiful Zishhhh!! Incredibly beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much Anushka
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It’s filled with so much emotions. especially he last two lines. Damn.
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That means a lot to me coming from you Sumit. Thank you so much! How have you been?
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I’m happy to read that. Really.
Oh, NaNoWriMo has made me occupied with be active on WordPress to post, but I really miss the interactions with you all due to lack of time.
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You’re doing your best to comment and reply. It’s more than enough. With the amount of work you do I wouldn’t be able to write for a single day
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This surely gives me huge power to keep it up straight 28 days of writing and posting on the blog.
You were one of the constant readers to support it. I cannot thank you enough for that.
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It’s a huge task. I love your writing! I await your post everyday
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I can’t stop smiling after reading this.
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I’m so late already, but I must not forget to praise this piece.
It’s beautiful ✨
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You are not late Rashmi. Your comments are always waited with good anticipation. Thank you so much!❤
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You’re very sweet Zish.
Done with exams?
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Yup….finally done! Came home yesterday…what about you? Did your exams get postpone?
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Oh they did.
Wow, you’re home.
Now you can sleep all day long nah. Wowwwwww.
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How are you spending time? Yup….catch up on sleep is priority🥺🥺
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I’m busy with renovation work yet.
If I find time, I study and rest toh you know it’s spend in sleeping only 😂
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Hahaha! Sleep is the best thing to do in such time….I want to sleep but I don’t and be awake owl!
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Why so?
As far as I remember we are proper kumbkarans, aren’t we?
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These days I preserve my sleep at night properly but then at 12 I find something else and get lost in that and sleep late and get up late
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Acha h na, maze karo
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Haha! Wapas jana college jald hi🥺🥺
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Ab kyu?
Ye final.semester tha na?
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Internship hain na…Uske liye…one year internship at college
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Oh okay.
So you’ll begin with dissection and stuff?
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Dissection to first year me hota….abhi actual patient ko treat and interaction
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Okay
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This is a great poem Nawaz of beauty that you are!
These lines:
“And with just a snap of finger everything falls apart,
I looked everywhere and she was never found,
Alas! I lost her due to my failure and cowardice”.
I love it because she can always be found through acceptace and love with a snap of the finger.
👏👏👏💖
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Thank you so much Cindy!❤ Acceptance is the key
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You’re so welcome Nawaz!
Yes, so true!!! 💖💖💖👏👏👏🌷
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Really beautiful and telling 💗
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Thank you so much!❤
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I especially liked “I wait and wait for the time to be right,
And with just a snap of finger everything falls apart,” The anxiety and loss of patience that follows leaving an addiction is depicted beautifully here.
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Thank you so much Jay!
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Wonderful poem. ♥️
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Thank you!❤
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Very welcome my friend. 🙏🏻
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Wonderfully written
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Thank you so much!
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The last lines, wow ❤️
Also, the model in the feature images resembles Megha Rao!
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Thanks a ton Hema! Yeah, she does❤
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