Just a look at you, my dear and my pupils dilate,
Is that so or you are just high on cocaine,
Or worst some brain’s bleeding vessel in need of ligate.
Your beautiful smile makes my heart miss a beat,
That’s a trouble; could be atrial or ventricular asystole,
Before you know it, my dear, you’ll be clad in white sheet.
I hear symphonies in your presence,
Do you by any chance have auditory hallucinations?
Get yourself checked before you also develop visual fluorescence.
A look from you and my cheeks heat up red,
My God! Malar flush! Doubtful about SLE or Frey’s,
Start on steroids or anticholinergic or you’ll be as good as dead!
Your one touch, an electrical impulse and I convulse,
My! My you are scaring me now! A bloody seizure!
Need a diazepam IV stat and need to stable your pulse.
I love you from the bottom of the my heart,
To say, it doesn’t have a bottom but a base,
Moreover, don’t blame the poor organ for your limbic playing over smart.
Make sure you highlight this piece for your future to beππ€π€π€
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When I have you guys, no need to highlight. You will tell the entire world! Last stanza is a dream part!ππ
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We are on it anywaysπ€π€π€
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Haha! All the best! Let your hippocampus achieve success!π€π€
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Your heart has a bottom and mine, rock bottom.
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There is no bottom in heart anatomically, dear! It has a base resting on the chest cavityππ
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Whatever is the base is also a bottom. π
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Figuratively yes, medically no!π
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Who cares about medical accuracy π€·π»ββοΈ
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I for one!π
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Shoo! Shoo! π
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You shoo away, buzz!π
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Y u gotta be so rude
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Ok….politely shoo and buzz away!ππ
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So many terms from biology text book π took me back to PU days ..
Very well written Zish … loved it!
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!β€
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Smashed it all right! πππππ
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Thank you!ππ π
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Wow! The end though.
Google helped me throughout to get the meaning. I loved it!β€οΈ
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Thank you so much!β€β€ It just has lots of medical terminologies usedπ π
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Sorry, I opted out biologyπ So I have no idea what all that was…
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Haha! It does have lots of medical terminology
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Clever poem. π
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Thank you Rachel!β€
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Wow! i am definitely making my bio teacher read this β€
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Haha! Thanks!π
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You have done the dissection so well Zish!
Look I have no idea about these Medical terms being used, terms are all alien to me but still I can easily figure out what’s said.
That’s the quality of a writer to make their audience underestand what exactly they’re trying to say.
It’s again a beautiful piece! I absolutely loved it!
Poor heart!
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Thank you so much Rashmi! β€β€
I was bit skeptical about posting it but I fortunately did it. I am glad you liked it. I was worried the medical terminology were used overboard!π π
Also, when will we be able to read an amazing post from you? It’s been long since I read one!π₯Ίπ₯Ί
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Oh I so wish to write one, but my head ain’t working these days.
I don’t know what’s wrong π
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I know you’ll write something commendable when you choose to write!β€ I’ll wait patiently till then. I know you can do it with ease!ππ
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You’re very sweet to have said that Zish!
I’ll try writing one soon!
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I’ll wait!β€
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So beautiful! β€ Especially the last one!! Very well written!!
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Thank you so much!β€
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Good one!!
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Thank you so much Era!π
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Wow! The way you blended poetry with medical details is just commendable. I don’t understand anatomy but I could feel those words. This is incredible! πΈ
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Thank you so much!β€
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That was a recapitulation of my Biology lessons and why my heart/body has been acting weird. XD Loved the piece!
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Thank you so much!β€
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Funny! π
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Thanks!π
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beautifully penned!
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Thank you!π
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Very well=written Nawazish! I had to read it a couple of times before I totally got it. then I laughed out loud! I don’t have a very strong science background, but obviously, you do! β€ All the best!
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Thank you so much Cheryl!β€
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Medical terms and humour! It was fun throughout. β£
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Thank you so much!β€
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wow love this.Being a medical student and coming across this is amazing. love your creativity
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Glad you liked it! Thank you so much!β€
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the pleasure is all mine
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You doctors always find something and then the way you put it in front of us is beautiful indeed!!ππ Really love the last lines where u said, not bottom from the heart but it’s the root of it, right?π Well penned, Nawazish,
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Love is the result of limbic system! Heart has a base and root of aorta(largest artery of the body)
Thank you so much!β€
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Ooh love the amalgamation of science and poetry! ππ
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Thank you so much!β€
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This is an amazing piece Nawazish β€οΈ biology and poetry it’s wicked. I’m loving this. Specially the last stanza too good.
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Thank you so much!β€ Thinking biologically heart has no function besides pumping blood!ππ
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Hahaha…true!! And when it stops pumping blood….sara khelaa khatam ππ
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Brain messes the entire thing!π€£π€£
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The only thing I got in this whole poem is the last stanzaπ
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My bad! It contains lots of medical terms!π π
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Oh no, itβs a good thing! I learnt a thing or two from your poem! So thank you, Nawazish π π
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Haha! You are welcome!β€
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Oh I loved loved loved reading this! I’m a regular biology junkie, haha. Lovely use of words. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much Rishika!β€ How have you been?
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What a cool combination of science and poetry π
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Thanks a ton Joana!β€
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Youβre welcome π€
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This is so unique and well done.. a sense o humor, some great medical terms that fit for each stanza, and your electrical attraction! I loved it.
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Thank you so much Karima!β€
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Very beautifully penned..specially that limbic system….
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Thank you so much Ma’am!π
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Well i could relate to many of the medical terms here Nawaz. Excellent use of your knowledge to craft a piece that has meanings beyond mere words. π
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Thank you Harsh! Perks being around medical professionals, you understood many term!π
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