Dissected Love

Just a look at you, my dear and my pupils dilate,
Is that so or you are just high on cocaine,
Or worst some brain’s bleeding vessel in need of ligate.

Your beautiful smile makes my heart miss a beat,
That’s a trouble; could be atrial or ventricular asystole,
Before you know it, my dear, you’ll be clad in white sheet.

I hear symphonies in your presence,
Do you by any chance have auditory hallucinations?
Get yourself checked before you also develop visual fluorescence.

A look from you and my cheeks heat up red,
My God! Malar flush! Doubtful about SLE or Frey’s,
Start on steroids or anticholinergic or you’ll be as good as dead!

Your one touch, an electrical impulse and I convulse,
My! My you are scaring me now! A bloody seizure!
Need a diazepam IV stat and need to stable your pulse.

I love you from the bottom of the my heart,
To say, it doesn’t have a bottom but a base,
Moreover, don’t blame the poor organ for your limbic playing over smart.

77 Comments Add yours

  1. Jigglypuff says:

    Make sure you highlight this piece for your future to beπŸ˜›πŸ€­πŸ€­πŸ€­

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    1. Nawazish says:

      When I have you guys, no need to highlight. You will tell the entire world! Last stanza is a dream part!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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      1. Jigglypuff says:

        We are on it anyways🀭🀭🀭

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      2. Nawazish says:

        Haha! All the best! Let your hippocampus achieve success!🀭🀭

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  2. Your heart has a bottom and mine, rock bottom.

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    1. Nawazish says:

      There is no bottom in heart anatomically, dear! It has a base resting on the chest cavityπŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒ

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      1. Whatever is the base is also a bottom. πŸ˜ƒ

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      2. Nawazish says:

        Figuratively yes, medically no!😎

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      3. Who cares about medical accuracy πŸ€·πŸ»β€β™‚οΈ

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      4. Nawazish says:

        I for one!😎

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      5. Shoo! Shoo! πŸ˜‚

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      6. Nawazish says:

        You shoo away, buzz!πŸ˜‚

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      7. Y u gotta be so rude

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      8. Nawazish says:

        Ok….politely shoo and buzz away!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  3. HappySoul says:

    So many terms from biology text book πŸ˜ƒ took me back to PU days ..
    Very well written Zish … loved it!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!❀

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  4. Smashed it all right! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜…πŸ™ˆ

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  5. Wow! The end though.
    Google helped me throughout to get the meaning. I loved it!❀️

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀❀ It just has lots of medical terminologies usedπŸ˜…πŸ˜…

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  6. Outlook says:

    Sorry, I opted out biologyπŸ˜‚ So I have no idea what all that was…

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Haha! It does have lots of medical terminology

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  7. Rachel says:

    Clever poem. πŸ˜€

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you Rachel!❀

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  8. Insider says:

    Wow! i am definitely making my bio teacher read this ❀

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Haha! Thanks!πŸ™ˆ

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  9. You have done the dissection so well Zish!
    Look I have no idea about these Medical terms being used, terms are all alien to me but still I can easily figure out what’s said.
    That’s the quality of a writer to make their audience underestand what exactly they’re trying to say.

    It’s again a beautiful piece! I absolutely loved it!
    Poor heart!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Rashmi! ❀❀

      I was bit skeptical about posting it but I fortunately did it. I am glad you liked it. I was worried the medical terminology were used overboard!πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

      Also, when will we be able to read an amazing post from you? It’s been long since I read one!πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

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      1. Oh I so wish to write one, but my head ain’t working these days.
        I don’t know what’s wrong πŸ˜”

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      2. Nawazish says:

        I know you’ll write something commendable when you choose to write!❀ I’ll wait patiently till then. I know you can do it with ease!πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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      3. You’re very sweet to have said that Zish!
        I’ll try writing one soon!

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      4. Nawazish says:

        I’ll wait!❀

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  10. So beautiful! ❀ Especially the last one!! Very well written!!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀

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  11. Era says:

    Good one!!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Era!πŸ™ˆ

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      1. Era says:

        😊😊

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  12. Sonali says:

    Wow! The way you blended poetry with medical details is just commendable. I don’t understand anatomy but I could feel those words. This is incredible! 🌸

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀

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  13. Shruti says:

    That was a recapitulation of my Biology lessons and why my heart/body has been acting weird. XD Loved the piece!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thanks!😊

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  14. beautifully penned!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you!😊

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  15. Very well=written Nawazish! I had to read it a couple of times before I totally got it. then I laughed out loud! I don’t have a very strong science background, but obviously, you do! ❀ All the best!

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Cheryl!❀

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  16. Anisha says:

    Medical terms and humour! It was fun throughout. ❣

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀

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  17. dessertflower5 says:

    wow love this.Being a medical student and coming across this is amazing. love your creativity

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Glad you liked it! Thank you so much!❀

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      1. dessertflower5 says:

        the pleasure is all mine

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  18. You doctors always find something and then the way you put it in front of us is beautiful indeed!!😁😁 Really love the last lines where u said, not bottom from the heart but it’s the root of it, right?πŸ˜… Well penned, Nawazish,

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Love is the result of limbic system! Heart has a base and root of aorta(largest artery of the body)

      Thank you so much!❀

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  19. besondersite says:

    Ooh love the amalgamation of science and poetry! πŸ˜€πŸ’–

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀

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  20. Anushk@ says:

    This is an amazing piece Nawazish ❀️ biology and poetry it’s wicked. I’m loving this. Specially the last stanza too good.

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much!❀ Thinking biologically heart has no function besides pumping blood!πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

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      1. Anushk@ says:

        Hahaha…true!! And when it stops pumping blood….sara khelaa khatam πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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      2. Nawazish says:

        Brain messes the entire thing!🀣🀣

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  21. Nathi says:

    The only thing I got in this whole poem is the last stanzaπŸ˜…

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    1. Nawazish says:

      My bad! It contains lots of medical terms!πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

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      1. Nathi says:

        Oh no, it’s a good thing! I learnt a thing or two from your poem! So thank you, Nawazish πŸ˜…πŸ™

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      2. Nawazish says:

        Haha! You are welcome!❀

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  22. Oh I loved loved loved reading this! I’m a regular biology junkie, haha. Lovely use of words. ❀️❀️❀️

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Rishika!❀ How have you been?

      Like

  23. Joana says:

    What a cool combination of science and poetry πŸ˜„

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thanks a ton Joana!❀

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      1. Joana says:

        You’re welcome πŸ€—

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  24. This is so unique and well done.. a sense o humor, some great medical terms that fit for each stanza, and your electrical attraction! I loved it.

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Karima!❀

      Like

  25. Very beautifully penned..specially that limbic system….

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you so much Ma’am!😊

      Like

  26. Kumar Harsh says:

    Well i could relate to many of the medical terms here Nawaz. Excellent use of your knowledge to craft a piece that has meanings beyond mere words. πŸ˜‡

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    1. Nawazish says:

      Thank you Harsh! Perks being around medical professionals, you understood many term!πŸ˜…

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